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Garden of shadows

a poem

By F.R. GautvikPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Garden of shadows
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In the garden of shadows, a secret dance,

Whispers weave a tapestry of chance.

Silent echoes, a moonlit trance,

A symphony of twilight, a fleeting romance.

Beneath the surface, where shadows play,

Illusions shimmer, leading astray.

A fragile truth in the light of day,

Unraveling the dreams in disarray.

The stars above, witnesses untold,

Their stories are written in bold constellations.

Yet, in the darkness, mysteries unfold,

A cosmic riddle, a narrative not to be controlled.

Within the heart, emotions ignite,

Passions flicker with an eternal light.

Yet, in the coldness of the night,

Love's flame extinguished, taken flight.

It is a dance of time, where moments waltz,

Yesterday's memories, tomorrow's faults.

Yet, when reversed, the past exalts,

A tapestry woven, connections that halt.

So, read these words, and explore both ways,

The tale revealed, forevermore.

In the echoes of now and the days to come,

A reverse journey, a meaning to adjoin.

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About the Creator

F.R. Gautvik

Author & screenwriter. I love outdoor sports and sitting in front of a fireplace on a cold day - writing.

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Comments (2)

  • Rachel S21 days ago

    deep and beautifully written!

  • Rachel Deeming3 months ago

    This was a good inverse poem. Quite whimsical in what it states.

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