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Poem of the darker kind...

By Paul StewartPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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I am Fear

I shall hunt

To the sound of great cheer

From the back to the front

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I am War

I shall relish

In the blood and gore

Your suffering I cherish

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I am Pain

I shall engrave

My name will drive you insane

Your death, you will crave

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I am Wrath

I shall feast

On this blood bath

From west to east

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I am Death

I shall devour

All in a single breath

Your blood, my shower

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Something a bit darker...Inspired a little by a Machine Head song, I Am Hell (Sonata in C#)

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Paul Stewart

Poet and writer from Glasgow.

Expect a heady mix of fiction, non-fiction, and poetry. Something for everyone and some stuff for no one!

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  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Nice! I feel like this one could have been entered into the horror challenge. So dark! Love it

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    I read this in my mind with a really deep, raspy voice. I loved the stressed/bolded words and the way they set the tone for the next part. So good!!

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Very dark in an amazing way 👍

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Gone to the dark side, you have! (Where's the Yoda emoji?) A great read, Paul!

  • Ooooo, deliciously dark! Loved this so much!

  • Very good

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Nicely done and dark indeed. Love it.

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    This is freaking awesome! Nice work!

  • Thavien Yliaster2 months ago

    Nice, kind of has a Horsemen of the Apocalypse feel to it.

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