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Poem of the darker kind...

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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I am Fear

I shall hunt

To the sound of great cheer

From the back to the front

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I am War

I shall relish

In the blood and gore

Your suffering I cherish

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I am Pain

I shall engrave

My name will drive you insane

Your death, you will crave

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I am Wrath

I shall feast

On this blood bath

From west to east

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I am Death

I shall devour

All in a single breath

Your blood, my shower

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Something a bit darker...Inspired a little by a Machine Head song, I Am Hell (Sonata in C#)

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Nice! I feel like this one could have been entered into the horror challenge. So dark! Love it

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I read this in my mind with a really deep, raspy voice. I loved the stressed/bolded words and the way they set the tone for the next part. So good!!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Very dark in an amazing way 👍

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Gone to the dark side, you have! (Where's the Yoda emoji?) A great read, Paul!

  • Ooooo, deliciously dark! Loved this so much!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Very good

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done and dark indeed. Love it.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    This is freaking awesome! Nice work!

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Nice, kind of has a Horsemen of the Apocalypse feel to it.

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