memories of your favourite shirt
all the little bits that hurt
all the games we didn't play
all the things we couldn't say
all the love we never made
everything we never gave
me and fucking you
all the nights we never slept
all the tears we never wept
all the hurt that fueled our fights
all the fears that filled our nights
anxious minutes hours days
a hundred thousand different ways
everything that we went through
me and fucking you
a gift a curse from up above?
crazy motherfucking love!
never minds the where's and why's
jagged ragged last goodbyes
hollow shallow twisted strain
we shared we dared and enjoyed the pain
nothing lasts nothing's true
just me and fucking you
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
- - -
I have an eBook, a collection of my favourite pieces
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (11)
Wow, it has a real angry pace. I love it!
Wow. This is actually quite intense. Very emotional and visceral. Great work Brenton.
Fucking outstanding. It's like the tension build until your words are screaming. Love it.
Wow, this one is epic! 💫
Johnny Rotten might want his subtitle back, but you've earned it!
Fucking loved it
Oooh, I love this so much. Raw emotion mixing with a very rhymey structure is a sweet irony for this piece and just perfect. I’m going back to reread. 😁
Your wordplay is, as ever, astounding 😁 Like a knife. Simple, clever, brutal. Cuts deep, gets under your skin. Love it.
Love this, so relatable, brutal, and honest!
WOW...there are as many nevers as evers in that "crazy mutherfucking love" There are so many lines I could highlight, that I resonated with. Wicked writing...bravo!!
Very relatable! I will add insights later as they seem to not work on my phone.