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Fraternal Twins

Of the Sun and the Moon

By Lizzy GabrickPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Fraternal Twins
Photo by Mark Tegethoff on Unsplash

Extraordinarily rare and breathtaking

Concealing each other and combining as one

Lunar and solar, the twins we have come to admire

Intertwined in one sphere of power and light

Penumbral and beautiful all the same

Shrouding each other for only a short while

Eclipsing the world in shadows and in light

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About the Creator

Lizzy Gabrick

I spent many years reading and writing in my adolescence but have found inspiration has lapsed since I have become more settled into my adult life--a career and marriage. I look forward to changing that and sharing my creations with you.

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  • Kristine Milewskiabout a month ago

    Love line 'Shrounding each other for a short time' Congratulations on top story 👏

  • Carol Townendabout a month ago

    This is a lovely piece. Well done on your Top Story.

  • Anna about a month ago

    Amazing! Congrats on Top Story!😊

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Absolutely beautiful! Awesome work, and Congrats on your Top Story!

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  • D. D. Leeabout a month ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Jazzy about a month ago

    I really like how you called them "the twins we have come to admire" I had written a storybook for kids that states this, and I really liked it in this poem!

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