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Forever Friends

Finding Forgiveness

By C. H. RichardPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Forever Friends
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Four Fantastic Friendships

Fun, Fabulous, Fearless

Faith For Fabric Familiar

Forever Friends

Faceted Faults

Failed Forgiveness

Foreshadows Future

Face Facts

Feelings Fade

False Fans

Forever Forgotten

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C. H. Richard

My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged

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  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Aww, the first few lines had me smiling thinking of my own forever friends, and then in just a line, 'Failed forgiveness' the whole tone turned and you had me just about to cry! Fantastic work being able to pull that many emotions out in such a short piece. Loved it!!

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a year ago

    OOF, this hit me in the feels! It has such an accurate feeling of growing up and all of the joy/bitterness friends bring! - Well done!

  • Emily Binkleyabout a year ago

    This is so relatable. Friendships and losing them are hard.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    This is wonderful and so comforting 🤗

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    That was great! Really well done

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Wonderful... Very well done!!!

  • Fabulous ✨💖😉🎉

  • Stevi-Lee Alverabout a year ago

    Awesome work 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • Veronica about a year ago

    such a bittersweet reality captured in words <3 loved this one. thank you for this

  • Lily Elleabout a year ago

    Very difficult to tell any kind of story within the parameters of this challenge. I tried a few and discarded them. You did a great job with this, even if that ending is kind of a kick in the guts! Sometimes poetry does that :-)

  • John M Edwards Jrabout a year ago

    You did very well with the restrictions imposed in this challenge.

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Oh, it started off hopeful and then became quite sad and realistic... but in a way... is inspiring to try to avoid those pitfalls. I really enjoyed this!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    There's some sad truth in there. Well done, as always.

  • Sadly, this happens quite a lot. Beautifully executed Tautogram!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fabulous!!!💖💕

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    This captures so well the dynamics of friendships gained and friendships lost. Nice job!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Well done. This is excellent!

  • Well done , great challenge entry

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Fantastically Fabulous! Love it!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Beautifully done!! That is the truth of most childhood “forever” friendships 😭. I’ve been lucky enough to keep a couple though!

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice!

  • Christina Hunterabout a year ago

    Wow those words speak truth. Well done ❤️

  • #KristinaWritesabout a year ago

    I love this one...Very true

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    This is awesome , love it 🥰

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