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For Our Lost Country

Remembering What We Once Held Dear

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read

I remember mornings

when sunlight spilled over dirt roads,

when possibility filled every conversation,

and voices carried trust, not suspicion.

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I mourn the slow decline

of civility, of hope present in daily life,

homes where laughter used to linger

now filled with tension and fear.

I mourn rivers we allowed them to choke,

landscapes scarred by neglect,

histories fading beneath our indifference.

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I mourn how we used to listen,

how dialogue-built friendships,

how neighbors met each other with recognition

and respect.

Now we speak in different languages and fury,

truth thinning like paper in a storm.

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I mourn not only what has vanished,

but what will be demanded in years ahead.

Our children inherit debts,

promises abandoned, burdens

imprinted on soil, sky, and law.

I grieve for ambition

that bends only to power,

and for voices silenced beneath its roar.

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Yet signs of strength remain:

those who refuse to surrender,

who plant gardens in broken paths,

who raise their voices against injustice,

who insist possibility still exists.

Even amid absence, even amid ruin,

something persists,

a memory of what might be restored,

a spark capable of becoming fire.

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I mourn with awareness,

holding both loss and hope

like fragile dreams,

shattered yet luminous,

waiting to catch sun once more.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael