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Flux

flowing or flowing out?

By Brenton FPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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nothing is permanent

and this now

this here

this is an active, agitated and anxious

state of non-permanence

a transitional phase at best

but nothing lasts

this is the alpha

this is the omega

and your precious time

a mind riddling

waste of abstract reasoning

but a part of the fragments

of a past we have chosen

to cling to and bring forth

into our nows

and we know and we don’t

these are just visions

of mere parts

of the we

the we that we want

to be

and then

it all becomes moot

all is a state of flux

it’s all beginning

and middles

and ends

and every gap

encased therein

every minute crevasse

from a humbling nadir

to a high solstice

it has

it was

it is

flux

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Brenton F

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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I have an eBook, a collection of my favourite pieces

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  • Gina C.10 months ago

    Deep and thought-provoking ❤️ Your poems always flow into little corners of emotion and concepts I feel like I need to explore at more profound levels. Awesome job!

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    So true, well expressed!!! Loving ir!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Oooo, this was so deep! I loved it!

  • Andrew C McDonald10 months ago

    This is quite deep and it resonates with truth. All time… every moment.. is flowing, changing, and in a permanent state of flux. Great job.

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