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Flowers Walk the Hill

Love me better

By Branden NavedoPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Flowers Walk the Hill
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She grows in gardens long neglected

by prophets practiced in heartbreak.

Gardeners played God with her body; then

ate of the roses that grew on her back

“Supposed to be wings,” she scolded them

cried that she could not reach her peak,

“Love me better,” thought enough roses would

aid in her climb to find what she lacks

then found that from out of their hearts

melted picks to mine from her rocks.

They found value in what she desired, now

the cliff is a hill she can walk up instead.

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About the Creator

Branden Navedo

I've mostly written poetry all my life which carries into my other writing. I also love wandering, so if you tell me to get lost I'll gladly oblige. In other words, yes, I respond well to criticisms. Click here for my author website!

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    Written by Branden Navedo