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Five Five Five

random number pattern

By Brenton FPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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insert another coin

and wait for the beep

wait for the beep

then wait for the beep

insert another coin

dial the number

five five five

random number pattern

five five five

dial the number

waiting for your connection

putting you through now

theres a fault in your connection

lines are crossed

the lines are crossed

dial the number

five five five

random number pattern

five five five

dial the number

putting you through now

cross country static hum

hello……hello………hello………hello

robot echoes

inset another coin to continue

dial the number

five five five

random number pattern

five five five

dial the number

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Comments (5)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    Oooo, I sang this to my own tune! Loved it so much!

  • Hannah Moore8 months ago

    I feel frustrated reading this.

  • Andrew C McDonald8 months ago

    To be honest I’m a tad lost on this one. Is it an Australian thing?

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