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Fish in a Barrel

Damn the Torpedos!

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 10 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read

Prowling invisibly

Stalking divisibly

Mocking me risibly—

Intently relentless

***

Cautionary tales

Of pulmonary rales

On Biblical scales—

Intensely repentless

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Death in a barrel, dressed

In morbid apparel, pressed

Sordid cabal crests

For cocking my gallows

***

We each get our 42 gallons*

Before we are shredded by dispassionate talons

The older we age the louder the calls on

Each of us to rest in a place farther hallowed

***

We swim, many, in a big pond, small

Or dominate, some, in a small pond, tall

Despite the buoyancy, our water will fall

To the bottom of our bespoke barrels

***

Cramming for finals by grabbing my Bible

Damning my death but conceding the cycle

Won't overwait forgoing my title

Death aims and torpedos, I swim down the spiral

*******

* A barrel, officially, is designated to be 42 gallons.

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. In Life Phase II: Living and writing from a decommissioned church in Hull, MA. (Phase I was New Orleans and everything that entails. Hippocampus, behave!

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Comments (2)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    This felt very mesmerising to me! Must be really nice to be Death!

  • Rob Angeli10 months ago

    42 is the meaning of life, the universe, and everything.

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