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Finding Targets


By Moe RadosevichPublished 6 months ago โ€ข Updated 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Finding Targets
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within the boundaries of anticipation is a yearning,

a need,

a need to be fulfilled within the bounty of desire,

reaching for perfection, we encounter defeat,

traipsing on we chance rejection,

we seek relief,

we buffer the scars,

where now do we aim the arrow,

what target remains unscathed?,

profound belief dwells in the heart of truth,

in the soul of integrity,

do we proceed beyond the imagined, or,

retreat to the past,

foregoing the future,

dwelling on the moment,

clinging to the obvious,

finding the unknown while visualizing our aim,

visualizing whatโ€™s to be,

having now discovered that,

choice remains the unscathed target!

thank you for reading, hoping my aim was good and struck a contemplative smile ๐Ÿ˜€

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    Very thought-provoking piece, noe. Great job!

  • Mariann Carroll6 months ago

    Very relatable

  • Gina C.6 months ago

    Wow - deep, thought-provoking, and uplifting!! Well done!! ๐Ÿ˜

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    I like the meaning of controlling our thoughts here! At least that is what I got from it. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

  • This was very powerful and uplifting!

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