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Final Day at the Mall

In loving memory

By Iris HarrisPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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Final Day at the Mall
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The smell of air conditioning and sales

Inundate the atmosphere.

The laughters and conversations of

Shoppers,

Heard from within bringing

Pleasantry

Along with children crying for

Attention.

Popular songs mixed in,

sharing a thrilling taste of

A nostalgic

Teenage adventure

Within the concrete arena.

Vibrant colors of clothing

Catch the eyes,

The latest fashion

Tantalizing,

Just a touch of

Soft silk cloth

Flows over fingertips.

Caressing the skin of

An expensive lover.

Screams of laughter

Transform into terror from the

Repetitive, macabre beat of ammunition.

Shells dance onto the floor,

Serving sorrow to sinless shoppers.

The stench of fear grips their hearts, while

Hard concrete slaps their faces.

Eight souls purloined before their time.

While those who can change laws,

Sing the same old song of

Thoughts and prayers

The cold dish of mourning for the

Eight.

They will forever be

Silent.

Erased.

Untouchable.

Flavorless in spirit.

Only the noisome odor of hate

Remains where they should have

Belonged.

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Iris Harris

An aspiring novelist. I enjoy writing ghost, horror, and drama. Occassionally, I dabble with some essays. You can find more of my work with the link below:

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  • Antoinette L Brey12 months ago

    Hard to believe that people would vote into office representives who care more for their personal wallets then the lives of their constituents

  • Leslie Writes12 months ago

    Shocking and timely and in your face. This is what we need to recon with. How long until enough is enough? Well done 💔

  • Donna Renee12 months ago

    😭😭. Very well done, Iris. That ending was crushing.

  • Extremely powerful and another demonstration of the horrible jokes "These are just sales demos for the NRA and GOP"

  • L.C. Schäfer12 months ago

    So horribly on topic. Well done, this is tough to write about but I think it's needed isn't it ❤

  • MT Poetry12 months ago

    Awesome👌✍❤

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