Dear girl found herself
In a marriage with a fiery wolf.
So she made the decision,
To bring some sunshine back into her life.
Rough patches would not be too bad
And birds could sing in her window again
Cloudy days would not be too dark she hoped
The wolf would be there but her mind would be in the clouds.
In the end her plan worked, but
Oh she is not alone in her pain anymore,
Now even her little girl gets to face the fiery wolf.
About the Creator
Gal Mux
Lover of all things reading & writing, 🥭 &
🍍salsas, 🍓 & vanilla ice cream, MJ & Beyoncé.
Nothing you learn is ever wasted - Berry Gordy
So learn everything you can.
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On Winning and Losing
Recently, the pleasant surprise of placement on the Vocal Bonus Leaderboard sent me down a rabbit hole. Now, rabbit holes are a pretty common place for me to spend time, but I don't always feel the call to write about them. To be honest, the thought of sharing some of them mortifies me.
By Dana Crandell2 days ago in Writers
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Heartwrenchingly beautiful
I hope she and the little girl are safe and happy ❤
So much sadness in so few words. Exceptional work, Gal! Well done!
Oh no, that's so sad!
I felt the pain in this poem. Subscribed!