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Feel It.. Write It… Communicate It

It’s What We Do

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 8 months ago • Updated 7 months ago • 1 min read
Feel It.. Write It… Communicate It
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Write from experience…

Write what you know

Let readers feel your pain

And revel in your glow

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Let them cry alongside you

When someone passed

Chuckle at your snickers

When someone passed gas

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Make it real… Make it tangible

So they hear the barn owl’s screech…

Smell the smoke of the campfire

Taste the salt of the beach

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Brush their cheek against soft swaddling

Feel your pride as you hold your newborn

Taste baby spit as finger enters mouth

Grimace as diaper becomes suddenly warm

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As new romance hits the horizon

Blaze with heat from passionate fire

When love requited be not scorned

Make readers burn with aching desire

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Let them see the sunrise

Feel the morning fog

Smell the opening rosebud

Hear crunch of leaves beneath mossy log

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Make readers cringe in disgust

As slime coated leeches crawl into a mouth

Or scream loudly in terror

As fangs and claws rend their way south

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Yes writers, this is your job

But if you can’t make readers

Laugh, cry, smile, frown, cringe, blush, or scream

Just feel it yourself… Only don’t mislead her

inspirational

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

Never mind. I give up.

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    Written by Andrew C McDonald