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A RubyRed Original Poem

By Ruby RedPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
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Photo by Tom Chrostek on Unsplash

Why do you treat me like a red-hot wire

With cutting edges and a razor-sharp smile?

Why do you think i've got time to waste

To mess around and trash this place?

How do you think that i'm here to lose

My expectations are higher than the blue moon!

So when your shitty vague feedback comes through

Don't expect me to live only to please you!

Thanks but no thanks; i've got a mind to flourish.

And next time you judge my faith,

Know that your greatness in the name of God doesn't count as justice.

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About the Creator

Ruby Red

Heya friend, I'm Red 🌱

I write poetry that is vulnerable, honest and might give you a glimpse behind my mask

Have a browse of my profile to read some strange and captivating stories!

Follow my Insta here for creative updates ✨

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