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Falling Through The Ice

Panic icy breathless sinking down down down

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
George’s Girl 2025

Falling Through The Ice

Beneath the Ice

Falling—

a sudden crack,

a breath stolen mid-gasp

as the world gives way beneath.

Cold fists wrap tight,

pulling, swallowing,

lungs burn with silence,

fingers scrape at glassy walls—

no door, no way out.

Light shimmers above,

so close, so far,

a blurred ghost of what was.

Heart slows, shadows stretch,

the ice holds tight.

sinking down down

And then—

nothing.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk