Poets logo

Falling for Cali

A Haiku

By Real PoeticPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Photo taken by the author

California’s air

in the fall is so priceless;

not cold but not hot.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Real Poetic

Welcome to my imagination. ✨

I write poetry & short stories.

Thanks for stopping by! ❤️

Website: real-poetic.com

Instagram: @therealpoetic

Reader insights


Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  3. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (9)

Sign in to comment
  • Kristen Balyeat3 months ago

    Love this! Cali weather is PERFECT!

  • Tiffany Gordon 3 months ago

    Nice! I wish I there! It's rainy & cold here! :)

  • Lol I thought Cali was a girl until I read your Haiku! I loved it!

  • Really enjoyed this one, it’s a comforting one.

  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    Lovely haiku, RP! Fall was one of my favorite things about the West Coast!

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    I like the sound of that! Lovely and the pic went so well :)

  • Nice. I am a native Californian myself, although I have been away for many years now. It is a beautiful state with gorgeous weather, and you captured it perfectly!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Mother Combs3 months ago

    great haiku

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.