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Fallen to the ground

Buried in reality, needing to distract

By Just DanielPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Fallen to the ground
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Distracted from the things that matter most

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Informed only after of the consequences

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Silently struggling but no one sees

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Turning the head the other way, lost in distractions of their own.

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Reality is all there is to life, boring and mundane

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Acknowledging the past and making new mistakes

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Continuing to move forward to no avail

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Thinking that distracting myself enough will get me through life

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Incredulous that no change happens, no matter how hard we try

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Open to new suggestions, but the new ones are the same old

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Nevertheless, I am tired and need to be distracted.

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About the Creator

Just Daniel

I write short fiction when I have time. There are also elements of my life interwoven with fantasy that I incorporated into my writing. I also like the unknown, so enter into the dark, true, and mysterious if you dare...

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  • CyCy10 months ago

    This hits home

  • MARIE ODEMS 10 months ago

    GREAT WORK!!!

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