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Eye Wash

What I'm after is the first impression. I want to show all one sees on first entering the room and what my eye takes in at first glance. — Pierre Bonnard, 1934

By Jack LantonPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Le Nu Dans le Bain, Pierre Bonnard, 1936

stare

into the lens

of the painter's frame,

a woman lying in a bathtub.

Lovely. Now gently, ever so gently,

swap out the artist's eye with your own

and peel his open, peer into that tender zone

where white is not white but a chorus of colour,

watch your eye condense, run down the steamed walls

gathering pace through brick and yolk and sweet pink

bottlegreen, kelpgreen, daffodil, lilac, and cream;

each cone filled with a scoop of light. You see?

Time is also a kind of paint. It's sticky.

But in a moment, the light changes

the moment's over too quickly

as water mixes with oil

to keep your lens wet

you miss it,

blink

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Jack Lanton

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    Written by Jack Lanton