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Extra Baggage

Haiku

By Lindsay SfaraPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Extra Baggage
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I have enough weight

with my baggage to carry.

Lift your own suitcase.

Stream of ConsciousnessMental HealthFamily
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About the Creator

Lindsay Sfara

I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.

Follow my novel journey and more: linktr.ee/lindsaysfara

"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien

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  • Thavien Yliaster2 months ago

    Some people have so much baggage that they don't have baggage their baggage has them. It's like they're being thrown around in a tumbleweed of their own baggage, especially when it comes to holding impossible standards for their partner, friends, family, etc.

  • John Cox2 months ago

    I'm with Shirley on this one. First of all, this is a wonderful and impactful Haiku, Lindsay. But your final line made me laugh out loud. Just sayin'.

  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    I don't know why this made me laugh, but it did!

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Oh my goodness, yes!!!!

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