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Ever Since They Gained Their Strength

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By Gal MuxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Ever Since They Gained Their Strength
Photo by Eyasu Etsub on Unsplash

Day by day

In the evening after work

Saturdays included,

Thursday even earlier. 

Rusty, he drives to the tarven.

At the same corner he parks his car

Coz he knows he will be there for a while.

Three drinks to start with he orders 

In time he doesn't even remember how many he's had

Oh in regret, how he wishes for the time to pass so that he can go home straight to bed coz,

Nobody in the house wants to spend time with him, ever since they gained their strength.

sad poetry

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Gal Mux

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Comments (4)

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    Very sad poem for some it’s their reality

  • Cheryl E Prestonabout a year ago

    Heartbreaking

  • Oh this was so sad! I didn't expect that ending. Very well done!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    So wonderfully penned, but that last line and the title are a kicker! Great work, Gal!

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