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Ethical Counterpoint

For Paul Stewart's 'Remix' Challenge

By Kendall Defoe Published about a month ago • 1 min read
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Ethical Counterpoint
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Here is a link to the challenge:

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ethical event?

counting up the points of the

livid change around us...

in my mind, utter

peace for the

season's

exit

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Here is a link to the original poem:

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶11 days ago

    Great remix! I had to have your poem & the original up at the same time & compare lines to appreciate exactly how clever this is!✅

  • M.about a month ago

    Amazing, I love how you played with the theme.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, you selected your own poem to remix! Loved your Acrostic remix!

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Rule breaker, sir! If I wasn't such a bad stickler for the rules myself, I'd have to disqualify you, but I'd be being a massive hypocrite and love that you let creativity and inspiration take you where it wanted to go! Thank you for entering and well done on such a cool piece! Really fine work, Kendall!

  • Brin J.about a month ago

    Oh, mixing Paul's unofficial challenge with the eclipse prompt was smart! ;)

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