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Eroded & Hollowed

by devil racer 4 years ago in surreal poetry
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Poem of a Deviled Mind

My mind is in a constant cry,

Fierce thoughts will not subside.

Walking with death

My soul will not rest,

The Devil’s rejects

Become my companions.

The Stars will cry the darkest tears,

I can hear Heaven,

But Heaven cannot hear me

For all these years.

As I stand before you

Broken in pieces,

This realm of guilt

A vicious picture I built,

Renders the vision of passion.

We are falling apart,

As we’re bound to collide

With each other.

A vile disgust overwhelms my heart,

Then shreds of guilt covers the wounds,

While the tracks of blood shine

Listening to my thoughts line for line

A tortured soul entwined

Pleas for reasons to Live, Love,

Hold, Cherish and Come Undone

Glisten and Shine.

A Lonely Pain

We lost the sense of touch,

That’s why we crash in to each other.

Setting aside the vision of despair,

Place me in the outer circle-

Crazy has come to town for a visit,

The dead will haunt you,

That’s only the beginning…

Forget what I can really achieve,

Push me in the evil path of relief

Change my mind of that ancient belief,

Sinking my heart to the bottomless sea

I give myself no reason to breath...


My Shadow walks beside Me.

My heart so shallow-

Is the only thing beating,

As I sat in my darkness.

To drunk for reality,

A vision left hazy.

Remembered thoughts become lost,

Tangled and knotted-

Just to evade the solitude of my voice...

~A Manifestation Assessed~

surreal poetry

About the author

devil racer

Writing poetry for 20 + yrs. My work is very dark, I have my own views and express them insanely deep with my poetry.

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