Marianne whispered to me
she suggested in no uncertain terms
how i should say it
and in what particular form
one sullen streaky winters day
i remained purely devoted
i was one of the Faithfull
and with my empty utterances
my English,
Broken
always Broken
for ever Broken
with a simple Witches Song
she Drained my Brain
and now i feel
Guilt
an i aint done
nothing wrong
i feel
yeah her guilt
and me mixed up
in her shenanigan's
Lucy Jordan's day
never improves
and here’s me wishing
her well for over
forty years
so What’s The Hurry
i'm not quite
a Working Class Hero
i never smiled
i never killed
and i don’t know why
why
Why’d Ya Dot it?
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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