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Ellipsing Eclipses

Fondly reminded of "Through Heaven's Eyes."

By Thavien YliasterPublished 23 days ago 1 min read
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Ellipsing Eclipses
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Eternally for Eternity, I've always been raised a believer

Called to understand the mysterious, wonderous, ways that this universe works as I am more than just a cog in its gears

Looking for answers, trying to figure how we all fit together yet

Interwoven we are via

Particles that pull and push as

String Theory that connects the smallest subatomic particle of this pocket watch that Benjamin Franklin theorized that such a creator made it uniquely perfect. As our universe if rational, so if the universe is the Created and Creator in one, then the Creator is rational too. From the smallest grain of sand, to the subatomic scale, to even the Moon

Eclipsing the sun, we all have the strength of the creator in us. So, the thumbprint of the creator viewed on the sun, might be hard to see, as we all are unique thumbprints left by the Cosmic Creationary Power of Creation, indeed.

Thavien's Token: Originally commented on Gina C.'s "God's Thumbprint."

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Charlie williams7 days ago

    Nice work

  • Mackenzie Davis18 days ago

    Beautiful, contemplative, philosophical, spiritual...just abundant in its wonder and conclusions, Thavien. Fantastic read!

  • Hannah Moore21 days ago

    There's so much in here, that relationship between being part of a whole and observing it.

  • Nice one

  • Nice work a lot of thought candy in this one

  • Krishan Mubashar22 days ago

    Well written! I love it.

  • String Theory. I've read somewhere about this, that we are called connected by invisible strings. Loved your Acrostic!

  • Shirley Belk22 days ago

    I believe this!!!

  • Rene Peters23 days ago

    Very well done, as always!

  • Heather Hubler23 days ago

    This is stellar, Thavien!!! ❤️

  • Babs Iverson23 days ago

    Brilliantly expressed & love it!!!💕❤️❤️

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