electric silence: reframed
senryu experiment.
By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago • Updated 2 years ago • 1 min read
the gasps and the gaps
the aching space between thoughts
electric silence
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Author's Notes: Sooo...experiment time. Had an idea that although the first time I posted this it was framed romantically - helped along with the image - it had been eating at me that it could be taken a different way, with a different image - less romantic - in fact, the opposite. So here you go.
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Paul Stewart
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