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electric silence: reframed

senryu experiment.

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
electric silence: reframed
Photo by Eric Ward on Unsplash

the gasps and the gaps

the aching space between thoughts

electric silence

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Author's Notes: Sooo...experiment time. Had an idea that although the first time I posted this it was framed romantically - helped along with the image - it had been eating at me that it could be taken a different way, with a different image - less romantic - in fact, the opposite. So here you go.

Here is the original for reference:

Senryuheartbreaksad poetrysocial commentaryperformance poetry

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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