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Eighteen Steps Into The Fog

Macbeth, Act One, as a List Poem

By Alyson Smith Published 11 days ago • Updated 11 days ago • 1 min read
The amazing Kathryn Turner as the Witches in Joel Coen's Macbeth

Eighteen Steps Into The Fog

A bloody battle finished on the smoking heath,

Three sisters waiting in the fog weave a crown of death.

A grateful king praising a warrior brave and bold,

Three whispered prophecies of royal power untold.

A friend promised a bloodline of future kings,

A messenger arriving with the wealth that treason brings.

A traitor swinging from the gallows high and cold,

A royal court gathered to watch the victory unfold.

A son named heir, a barrier placed upon the road,

A captain dreaming of a path stained deep with royal blood.

A letter read in candlelight behind a castle door,

A lady begging spirits to unsex her for the war.

A husband greeted home with a dark and murderous design,

A trusting monarch welcomed with sweet words and bitter wine.

A hostess smiling blindly like an innocent flower,

A coward stepping backward from the shadow of the tower.

A man's pride shattered by his wife's commanding breath,

A false face forced to hide a heart that chooses death.

I have recorded the reasoning and the processes around creating this poem on https://vocal.media/writers/sharing-the-process-of-creating-my-list-poem-around-macbeth-act-one

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About the Creator

Alyson Smith

Neurodivergent, working-class writer and artist diagnosed with Bipolar. Based in Newcastle-upon-Tyne. MA in Creative Writing. Currently waitressing while finishing my novel.

https://buymeacoffee.com/alysonsmith

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    Written by Alyson Smith