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Eclipsing Past Self

Acrostic Poem

By Patrick HPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Eclipsing Past Self
Photo by Luz Mendoza on Unsplash

Every step leads him deeper into the unknown,

Casting shadows of doubt upon his weary soul.

Lost in the vast expanse, he longs for light,

Invisible to those around him, yet he fights.

Pressing onward, driven by hope's flickering flame,

Seeking solace in the darkness, he calls it by name.

Eclipsed by fear, yet he journeys on, whole.


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Patrick H

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Flamance @ lit.about a month ago

    Wow this is so amazing job

  • Alex H Mittelman about a month ago

    Love the acrostic!

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