Egregious, emphatically in suspense,
Contusive bump of light on water, reflection,
Languish lamp of shaded fantasy, correction,
Intrusive circle, like a misfit witness, glowing,
Pendulum of senses, messing up the balance,
Surreal noises, dogs barking, chicks chirping,
Eclipsed world awaiting its own unshrouding.
About the Creator
Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Full Stack Developer in the making and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
By Chloe Rose Violet 🌹6 days ago in BookClub
Comments (4)
Misfit witness, eclipsed world. It feels like coming from the inner depths of the soul. Loving this!
Yes, the imagery is very powerful in this one. "Surreal noises, dogs barking, chicks chirping," Exactly how an eclipse feels, surreal.
Misfit witness, I really loved that! Such a beautiful Acrostic!
Beautiful, excellent, bravo very well written poem