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Eclipse

a poem

By Kali MailhotPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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Eclipse
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Every now and then, a dark moon rises: looming over your head,

Casting a dark blue light onto the room, and onto the silhouette of you.

Luring my gaze, I settle into the whites of your eyes; as it waxes and wanes.

In time, the light of the room returns, and I remember just where we are.

Perpetually bound, it falls and rises, leading my mind with a string.

Strung 'round your little finger, I am wound tighter and tighter,

Each touch of horizon.

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About the Creator

Kali Mailhot

hobby poet always looking for new things to write about.

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  • QC (A.K.A Soul Writer)22 days ago

    Beautiful!

  • Beautiful piece!

  • Tiffany Gordon 25 days ago

    Beautiful work!

  • Cheryl E Preston25 days ago

    Beautiful and inspiring poetry

  • angela hepworth25 days ago

    Amazing piece! Congrats on top story!

  • D. D. Lee25 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Kendall Defoe 25 days ago

    Perfect! 🏅

  • Anna 25 days ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Cathy holmes25 days ago

    This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • Kiersten Weldon25 days ago

    Very descriptive. Your word choice really helps to paint the picture!

  • I LOVE YOUR BEAUTIFUL STORY

  • Beautifully and magically written. Great work Kali.

  • Super evocative writing; keep it up!

  • Strung around your finger….those last couple lines were my favorite great job on this

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Excellent! Love your interpretation! Well done, Kali.

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