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Eclipse-sphere

Ode to an Eclipse

By Joe PattersonPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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Eclipse-sphere
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Entering the atmosphere everyone

Can see me clear. Putting out the dawning

Lights. Converting the midday sun into an

Instant night. Why does my energy wow the

People living here? I’m what they came to

See in every hemisphere, it’s clear I am the

Eclipse-sphere.

Odenature poetry
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About the Creator

Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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  • Esala Gunathilake7 days ago

    A nice Acrostic poem.

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    So clever and I really love the rhymes so much! ❤️

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    I admire your style and transparency even if you are still perhaps) avoiding my writing because I cross your personal boundaries. I love your truth in this.

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Ohhh, I liked the perspective on this one!! How cool!

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