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Eclipse

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 16 days ago 1 min read
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Eclipse
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Electronically vivid planted in the sky,

Choosing to be the courier for a unique change up high,

Lament to everyone’s eyes

Indomitable you stand alone as a

Paragon,

Silently socializing with the universe,

Ebullience…

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Jazzy 15 days ago

    Beautiful

  • Marilyn Glover16 days ago

    Beautiful work! ❤️

  • This is absolutely great. Beautiful use of language!

  • Andrea Corwin 16 days ago

    Very nice! Eclipse, good job!❤️

  • LOVELY POEM

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