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eclipse

an acrostic poem

By Chloe Rose Violet 🌹Published 4 months ago • 1 min read
eclipse
Photo by Taylor Smith on Unsplash

everything begins to happen within the change of the seasons.

change becomes you when you put the work in to become a different version of yourself.

like the sun and the moon, we were polar opposites who eclipsed each other's needs.

interesting how when we collided we both got to shine at the same time.

people are allowed to change their minds about you and that's okay.

sometimes not everyone can see how much you are able to change and grow in the midst of a season of pain and suffering.

even I didn't mean to eclipse you in the midst of my sorrows

Chloe Rose Violet 🌹

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Comments (3)

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    I know you've tagged it as "For Fun" but this was an incredibly poignant and deep piece, Chloe! Sounds like a troubled relationship and that last line...really leaves a lump in the throat! Well done!

  • Shirley Belk3 months ago

    sounds like some of my relationships...

  • Brin J.4 months ago

    "like the sun and the moon, we were polar opposites who eclipsed each other's needs."😭 Talk about poetic! This line was profoundly moving.

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