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An Amazing Experience

By R.R. MichaelsPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Jongsun Lee on Unsplash

Everywhere you look, people are standing in the park gazing at the sky awaiting the miracle.

Cops stop traffic and join the throng, standing outside their cruisers staring upward.

Luna and Sol jostle for supremacy as people jostle for views through the many telescopes scattered about the park.

Inside, people stare at their TV screens, watching Luna eat Sol by phosphorous proxy.

Parties flourish as the eclipse reaches totality and the oh'ing and ah'ing begins.

Soon Luna begins to slip aside to allow Sol to resume his reign over the daytime.

Everyone cheers, and people young and old, celebrate Sol's rebirth.


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R.R. Michaels

Aspiring author, with a major political thriller in the works with lots of sexual & erotic scenes & themes in support. The work I submit here will largely be ancillary scenes or parallel work which aligns with Vocal's community standards.

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Comments (2)

  • Jazzy 2 months ago

    I love these characters you gave the sun and moon, so well done

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Very descriptive use of the word and to tell the tale of the step by step process Well done

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