Eat This Meta-Verse
For all who find haikus delicious
Come, breathe in the scent
of stone-ground, flame-broiled haikus
Makes your mouth water
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My post-Quadru Haiku tribute to the feast of poems shared on Vocal.
[Photo credit correction: Photo by Vincent Keiman on Unsplash]
About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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Comments (9)
A feast of haikus That makes for quite the buffet For everyone's tastes
Loved this, such a creative take! Well done! :)
thought I should let you know that I wrote a poem of the story of the Haiku I sent you. It's a true story and one of the rarest moments of my life. best regards.
Well done of course, as well as very nice 😀
a quadra haiku - just for you the bird After the bird hit the window, its beak askew and oh, so broken My heart broke as well for I could not finish it as my pa would have I simply held it as it gasped, ever slower until it was gone I apologized and scooped a small grave for it in the flower bed
Wonderfully delightful!
Lol, this was fantastic!
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lol. Nicely done.
Hahaha! This was great! Mmmm, smell those haikus grilling. Love it :)