Earth I Breathe freely
Leaving my suffocation,
Greet the ambiance...
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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I loved the idea of breathing freely, being released from suffocation. Nicely done :)
This was unexpected and an interesting take on the challenge.
Deep.
Sweet & lovely!!!💕💖😊
Luv it!! Really great!!
Beautiful!!