Crust, mantle, and core
A layered cake we call home
The baker unknown.
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We have what we need
Life’s vital ingredients
Baked on the surface.
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With icing for air
Sweetened with a perfect blend
Of gaseous atoms.
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An oven mitt shield
Guarding us from scorching rays
Life’s great recipe.
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Meg
I'm here to explore the depth of human experience and to stop procrastinating my passion.
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The Voyeur's Incandescent Reasoning
The woman sat nonplussed, in the Waiting Room. In a sort of daze, looking straight ahead patiently. She had already had three small breakfast's that morning and a nip of sherry, this was not unusual she would typically wait until an hour after she took her anti-depressant and was her morning routine. She was merely following instructions she assured herself, shifted slightly in her seat and feeling a little heart burn thought, maybe she should skip lunch. Dom had said to have the task done this week. She was well used to his methods and desired to get this over and done with soon. She glanced at her watch, smiled weakly at the Receptionist who was there for a moment and then gone.
By Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle Author6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (3)
pretty cool to create the cake metaphor.
I hope this gets a little more attention. Loved the baker unknown line. I felt very peaceful reading this.
Whoaaa, this blew my mind! I loved the concept of cake and icing! This was brilliant! I've hearted and subscribed! 💖