
Beauteously Lush & Poetic
Dusk drifts in on violet feet,
soft as a baby's breath
on the moss‑green stone.
The last birds fold their music,
tucking daylight into their wings.
Between the pines, a quiet unfurls~~
a slow exhale of the earth itself.
Here, even shadows seem to listen
for what the sun feels too shy to say.
And in that dimming gold,
the world feels briefly held,
as though night is not an ending
but a gentle hand closing a book.

It is dusk... and the mourning dove’s whispery, panting melody echoes through the woodlands .
They screech like demons, as the woodpecker and a scold of jays fight for birdfeed
Nearby, other birds call out: the rust-colored robin - the vibrant red-yellow finch, the spotted towhee, and the green-gold siskin with its mournful, one-note squeal.
My heart skips its beats, reaching towards these refrains - which I picture being played on fifes and piccolos carved from old bones.
Darker, More Hauntingly
The woodlands swallow the light,
one trembling ember at a time.
Branches stiffen into silhouettes,
their fingers black against the dying sky.
A chill threads through the undergrowth,
carrying the scent of endings.
Dusk is a quiet requiem here ~~
a slow tolling of unseen bells,
calling the day to its grave
while the forest stands witness,
solemn, ancient, unblinking.
Negligibly, Almost Prayerlike
Dusk settles.
Leaves fall to silence.
A lone wind
beckons the sun.
In the dimness,
the forest bows -
in gratitude
for one more turning
of the light.

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Novel Allen
Existing in mist and shadow. Neutrally Abstract.
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