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Doris Without Teeth

originally written for SLWP

By David Gabe JumonvillePublished 4 months ago • 1 min read
photo of my aunt, Pauline Florker - the poem's inspiration

Doris

without teeth

looked down

into a metal bowl of mush

thinking

a damn good thing

too

or they might have put her down

like the dogs

she crossed

one long

lean

leg

a twin

atop her sister

and said,

A damn good thing

two.

Ekphrastic

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David Gabe Jumonville

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    Written by David Gabe Jumonville