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Don't Know

(In the game of hearts the field is never level)

By Brenton FPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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i don’t know what to do, to do or say

you get so damn close and then you pull away

i see a different you, everyday

i just can’t carry on, carry on this way

i don’t know what to say, to say or do

you’re leaving me lost, without a clue

it’s ripping me apart inside loving you

those moments of closeness, so precious too few

i don’t know what to do or say

i’m trapped inside this game you play

i don’t know why or what is real

i don’t know what to think or feel

i don’t know what to say or do

i only know it’s cause of you

i don’t know when or why or how

i only know there’s nothing now

u pleez me

u sqeez me

u teez me

u freez me

heartbreak
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About the Creator

Brenton F

It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa

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I have an eBook, a collection of my favourite pieces

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