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Does He Truly Care?

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By Gal MuxPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Does He Truly Care?
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Dear girl,

In the first place, does he come running when you call

Sure? Or does he come only when he needs to.

Two, does he make the time to reach out or do you always have to nudge.

Right there.

And does he care to try to remember the list of your favourite things?

Care enough to know the things you care about.

Three to four, does he tell you things about him, deep things does he open up?

In the midst of it all

Only you girl can tell,

Now if he truly cares or …

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About the Creator

Gal Mux

Lover of all things reading & writing, 🥭 &

🍍salsas, 🍓 & vanilla ice cream, MJ & Beyoncé.

Nothing you learn is ever wasted - Berry Gordy

So learn everything you can.

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  • Dana Stewart6 months ago

    Wow! I loved the vibe from this, great take on the challenge!

  • I guess love can blind and also distract us from seeing what's right in front of us. Loved your poem!

  • Paul Stewart6 months ago

    Oh, I love this take on the challenge. Well don Gal, some sobering food for thought in this!

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