Dear girl,
In the first place, does he come running when you call
Sure? Or does he come only when he needs to.
Two, does he make the time to reach out or do you always have to nudge.
Right there.
And does he care to try to remember the list of your favourite things?
Care enough to know the things you care about.
Three to four, does he tell you things about him, deep things does he open up?
In the midst of it all
Only you girl can tell,
Now if he truly cares or …
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Gal Mux
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Hall of mirrors
Things used to matter, before all the noise. And at that time when things still had meaning, there had been dreaming too, when dreams still mattered. And the brightest dream from those times was full of mountains and seas and smiles and the types of passion that absorbs you the way a dog is absorbed by witnessing something for the first time: with absolute presence, and awe.
By Giulia Viti7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (3)
Wow! I loved the vibe from this, great take on the challenge!
I guess love can blind and also distract us from seeing what's right in front of us. Loved your poem!
Oh, I love this take on the challenge. Well don Gal, some sobering food for thought in this!