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Do I Love you,Blue

True Blue By: Mariann Carroll

By Mariann CarrollPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Do I Love you,Blue
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True Blue I so Love you

I feel the Drama of Life

Until it no longer serves you

True Blue I search for you in the sky

I try to reach for you so I fly

I got there and your blue was just an illusion

That only add to my confusion

True Blue I feel you in the Ocean so deep

So much Mysteries to uncover

That My heart cannot keep

Your depth is an Inspiration

That makes me weep for Aspiration

True Blue I finally made you mine,

But why did you make me Cry

that I search for the sun in the sky

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    This was so amazing ugh

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