Don't be too loud
I don't like long nails
Such a pretty smile
Try not to take up too much space
Right, you are wearing that?
Act like a lady
Calm down; you're being emotional!
Too bold, too strong.
I like a submissive girl
Oh, no. You aren't wearing that!
No, that will distract the boys.
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme