in a suit case
in a brief case
in a hat box
in a golf bag
FREEZE 1 We are in the back of a small cheap but reliable looking automobile. There is a large bulky sports bag on the back seat. The car is parked at an awkward angle near the mall exit.
under a seat on a bus
in a bin by a school
in a locker at the YMCA
on a seat at maccas
FREEZE 2 A fire drill is being conducted in a small mall in Sometown, Anywhere. Wardens usher office staff, shop keepers and shoppers to the evacuation point. The designated evacuation point at this particular mall is the car park near the mall exit
in a duffel bag
in a cake box
in a back pack
in the back of a car
FREEZE 3 Was that a beep that only a dog could hear? What wireless horror zipped through the air that day? The awkwardly parked car suddenly erupts. A gushing fireball sweeps out and around itself in a hellish arc of fiery pain, death and mutilation.
in a flash
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in a breath
( )
in a microsecond
( )
in a heart beat
()
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About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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I have an eBook, a collection of my favourite pieces
Comments (2)
maccas?
Awesome!!! Brilliantly written!!!❤️❤️💕