entities of light,
caged in a gilded prison
left in an umbra of darkness,
isolated from the universe,
powerless and without purpose,
scared to venture out of their cages,
even for a life of freedom
About the Creator
Brin J.
I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Turning Pages of Life
Life’s like a book — some parts are good, others not so much. Still, keep turning the pages; you might find the best chapter next. If someone hurts you, choose to forgive or just let it be, but never change who you are for them.
By Emily Chan - Life and love sharing7 days ago in Poets
My To Be Read List
I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
By Chloe Rose Violet 🌹2 days ago in BookClub
Comments (10)
Awesome story I like it congratulations 🎉🎉
Wow. This is amazing. Those last two lines are especially painful. Excellent entry.
Beautifully expressed!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Lovely layers in this! Great acrostic!
Wow, that was deeper than I expected. Wonderful poem!
This was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!
Ah, Brin....this is...sublime.
That was pretty deep! Great entry!
An adroit acrostic, richer in pathos than most!
A lovely Acrostic poem.