Did It Hurt You
to hurt me? Doesn't seem so.
How do I go back
Why do I want to
You were the one good thing
That doesn't fix the rest of it
I just love a what if
You're the biggest one
That makes you still interesting
I think you think of me
I was the last heart you broke
but it made your heart full
if you don't mind, I won't come to the wedding
my gift to you is knowing I would come running
I have a life of my own
I started over the second you moved on
why does no other rejection hurt like the first
maybe I wanted perfection, first, try
I should have known my luck is shit
guess I'll just keep saying I'm fine
don't want to fix me for me
but I don't want my broken heart to hurt others
just need to find someone who loves whom I pretend I am
they should never have to see what is dead in me
About the Creator
Hufflecup
I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.
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Sex and love story
Few human emotions entwine as deeply and passionately as sex and love in the maze of human emotions. They are the soul's twin flames, illuminating everyone who dares to dance in their flickering light with a spell of passion and devotion. But hidden behind the creases of this intricate embroidery is a story that goes well beyond the sensuality of desire and explores the fundamentals of closeness and connection.
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Good writing
Nice!
Unique cover , You can feel the sadness of unreciprocated love and how it broke ones feeling.
I think this is the sad story of many
Nice job :)
Thank you for sharing this. It was very relatable as I think so many people have been through at least one difficult breakup.