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desert rain

a poem

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 7 months ago 1 min read
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desert rain
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The desert does not forget the rain

For it penetrated deeply

Quenching her thirst

Sating with silken liquid

.

The desert does not forget the rain

For it also drowned her

Washing away

Precious forms of life

.

The desert does not forget the rain

For it restored her memory

Before it came

She was a mountain

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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

Know you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

🍊🍋💥🍋🍊

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    This was so deep! Someone comes into our lives and gives us the love that we've been wanting. Then they also drown us in sorrow. We may have stood strong like a mountain but they manage to break us down. And then they leave because it cannot rain forever. Like Brenton asked, does the desert forgive the rain?

  • Brenton F7 months ago

    Love the way it ended - does the desert forgive the rain?

  • Stephanie Hoogstad7 months ago

    This is beautiful, Kayleigh. It’s so powerful.

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh7 months ago

    That last verse got me! Grief and gratitude can be so intertwined in our memory. Lovely work.

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    Beautiful, Kayleigh.

  • Joelle E🌙7 months ago

    Omg. This is so profound. Loving this series but this one especially. The last line sent me 👑⛰️ amazing work Kayleigh

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