Deja Vu
The Recurring Dream

Sunlight dappled, orange tasseled
Forest floor, footsteps sure
I’ve certainly been here before.
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Crunching leaves, woodland streams
Misty veil, morning pale
I’ve found my favorite walking trail.
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But something’s wrong, the sunlight fades
Rocky path now masked in haze
Roots entangle, vines enstrangle
Cooly forgotten, the dark invades
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And then it’s just me
Standing alone in the gray aisle
Counting cracks in the ceiling tiles
Ceiling tiles—how did I get inside?
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“You’ve got three days to pay!”
The rusty knife jams in the table
“I promise to pay as soon as I’m able!”
The cloaked shadow walks away
When payment is due, chaos ensues.
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I start to run, there’s no other choice
Down the hallway, door after door
His raspy voice begins to mock
Every door is locked, locked, locked!
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At last a handle turns
I scurry inside, hoping to survive
My chest is heaving, labored breathing
The room is dark
Lit only by the spark of his Cuban cigar
I see the golden glint of his smile
“Too bad you didn’t get very far.”
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A tunnel opens in the ground
Twisting, tumbling, reality crumbling
I spiral downward towards the trees
I’m caught in a bed of fallen leaves
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Autumn forest, morning sunrise
Breath of fresh air, still alive.
The world is calm, the trail is clear
I think I might go walking here.
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Sunlight dappled, orange tasseled
Forest floor, footsteps sure
I’ve certainly been here before.
About the Creator
Ahna Lewis
Just a high school English teacher who never quite got over her dream of becoming an author. :)
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Comments (5)
Beautiful natural imagery and the so thrilling! Really enjoyed reading this 👏
I love how you weave the human element into this! Wonderful flow :) I have always been a free form/free verse poetry writer because I love the "freedom" of it. But there is something almost magical about weaving a poem together with a scheme. Wonderful job!
This one intensifies steadily until the peaceful dénouement. Good job capturing the dream state here Ahna. Have you ever seen Satoshi Kon's movie "Paprika"? Parts of this poem reminded me of it in various ways.
This was incredible! Loved the tension building and this disorientating nature! bravo!
We've all been there! Nice lines!