pale blue fire sifts
Tired bones, lonely soft soul
Can you keep me whole?
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About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos,
I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels
The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books
Comments (9)
'Tired bones, lonely soft soul' is a stunning line! Well done!
Heart broken!!! Left a ♥
Nice and Deep Piece 💙👥💯📝
This is so beautiful. I love the contrast between "pale blue" and "fire". Also, the rhyme at the end is lovely :)
Fabulous work!
fantastic. I loved it.
Tired bones, lonely soft soul. That line resonated so deeply with me! Loved your Haiku Merly!
Probably not, my friend. But I would do what I can to support your healing.
Nice work great writing I’m new here so I’ve just dropped a few books❤️