dear
a poem about the constant struggle to grow and reach but somehow still be content in the moment
your heart is a forest
that's long overgrown.
your goals and ambitions,
uneven in tone.
trying so hard,
still coming up short.
a face lost in a crowd
of more worthy cohorts.
your pace is too slow,
got to step on the gas.
mind your speed on the dash,
the others to pass.
better to go
fast,
fast,
fast.
be better,
the best,
the sun breaking at dawn.
the dreams that you make,
glowing future you've drawn.
the full moon's reflection
on the water at night.
original and strong,
lean, luxurious and tight.
But
don't forget
to somehow put the rest first.
calm your hunger and drive,
that unquenchable thirst.
deep breaths
in
and
then out.
thank for the stars lighting up the night sky
prayers for those whose lives have passed by
find solace and joy in the comforts of home
for freedom to mind, create and to roam
lest you forget all that you have,
the envy of many,
cream, cherries and mousse,
the desserts of the few,
all of these blessings,
bestowed upon you
ingrate
and
brat
...
...Still...
don't want to lose
even one second more,
life is finite
with no assured encore.
be better,
be better,
Be
Better.
...
Still...
you're more than enough
as you are in this moment.
In fact,
maybe,
a little too much.
About the Creator
Merrie Sanders
Writing for fun and as an escape from the everyday. After all, what is life for if not to create?
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (4)
Wow, beautiful!
I loved this. Especially the description of the moon and your ending.
Well done!
Awww, what a wonderful poem! I loved it!